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Eustace Jabberwocky
hackmeister (hackmeister) wrote on July 8th, 2007 at 04:54 pm
Well, as to criticism insofar as creative writing goes, let me address some formal issues before we delve into the critique itself. Ecktually, with respect to the semiological thrust of the. . .ahem. . .

Just kidding. What, you don't want me to say anything about your trip report??

It was funny, it was charming, it was informative, and told us exactly how the trip affected you emotionally. When you said you were crying on the plane, I wanted to be in the seat behind, wrapping my arms around you, saying, "There, there. There, there. . ."

Which means your piece was WELL-WRITTEN! You silly thing.
Nice. And the pictures were wonderful.

Thanks so much for putting so much effort into this.
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