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05 July 2007 @ 05:29 pm
Puerto Rico Pictures! YAY!  
Finally! I have some of the pictures and description of our Friday/Saturday to and in Puerto Rico ready for public consumption. You can find them here...

http://www.relaxorium.com/journalpics/pr/

...and leave comments to it on this post.

P.S. Professional writers are not allowed to critique my writing. I'm looking at you, John.

 
 
Current Location: Not Puerto Rico
Current Mood: amusedamused
 
 
 
hackmeister: Eustace Jabberwockyhackmeister on July 8th, 2007 04:54 pm (UTC)
Well, as to criticism insofar as creative writing goes, let me address some formal issues before we delve into the critique itself. Ecktually, with respect to the semiological thrust of the. . .ahem. . .

Just kidding. What, you don't want me to say anything about your trip report??

It was funny, it was charming, it was informative, and told us exactly how the trip affected you emotionally. When you said you were crying on the plane, I wanted to be in the seat behind, wrapping my arms around you, saying, "There, there. There, there. . ."

Which means your piece was WELL-WRITTEN! You silly thing.
Nice. And the pictures were wonderful.

Thanks so much for putting so much effort into this.
Fritters: TT SF Blushing by Frittersfritters on July 8th, 2007 09:18 pm (UTC)
Mainly I just didn't want anyone looking too deeply at my grammar! 0_o I think I am the queen of sentence fragments some days.

And I'm glad you enjoyed it, I'll be making more as soon as I get all the pictures transferred over to Sarah's computer, which she is being a doll and letting me borrow. (See? I started a sentence with "and"!!)